Snow Man

adding detail to the sentence

Every day at camp bentzon Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the scary and terrifying

confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course and the small version was con course.

 I was nervous about sailing cause i was going to fall out

I was nervous as when i was about sailing camp.

I was scared when We went abseiling.

We went abseiling when i got up i went down so fast cause i thought i was going to fall.

Big Boys Toys

On Saturday i had to wake up early so I could be ready for my aunt so we can go big boys toys. She arrived at our house we were stool getting ready once we were finished we went. We started our long drive to Big boys toys I thought it was going to be amazing it took for ever but we got there. The line was huge finialy we got in it was so cool inside it was so cool we saw the new Lamborghini.

Then we saw some wake border and BMW and some of the best motorbike people in the world. But before all of that there was this man in a car driving on two wheels it was freaky. Sadly the day was over and we went back home it was so cool there it was a day i will never forget.

Rousie

Cleo's Big Day

On the first day of spring Cleo was grazing the new green grass. She was glad that winter was over because it was too cold for her. Cleo’s fleece was hot so she laid down under a tree.

Then Cleo heard a noise that seemed familiar it was the 4 wheeler bike. Cleo the Ewe heard some barking “woof woof”and went to hide away from the sheepdogs. She was afraid of the sheepdogs because they frightened her when Cleo was a little lamb.

All the sheep made a fast dash away when the dogs came closer and closer. The dogs chased after the sheep, and the dogs got closer and closer the sheep were slowing down.Then the dogs started barking then Cleo hid behind a tree she was waiting for them to go once they went she got out from behind the tree.

The sheep were hopelessly do not know what they are going to do to them. There was a big mob of sheep just waiting around doing nothing.

Then they walked into the shed waiting again for the second time. Then the dogs decided to walk all over the sheep like they think they're the boss. Then it started to move from waiting for ever Cleo made it in then what do you think.

They are in the shed going to sleep. So they can be dry for the shearing in the morning. But Cleo could not sleep because she didn't know what was going to happen to her.

It was the next day Cleo did not know what was going to happen then she heard a shaving sound. There was no turning back she was scared then she felt it. They turned it on to it’s back SHE SAID “HELP HELP THERE GOING TO KILL ME HELP” Once it was finished

Cleo look like she was naked she started saying “WHAT HAVE THEY DONE TO ME?”. But she was relieved that she was safe but she didn't want to do it again and she said “LESS IT OVER”.

And she will live happy for the next year until it it happens again. She was so happy her fleece was off so she would not be so hot for the next 12 months.

The Boy Who Cried Wolf

This is my score.

Couplets

A couplet is a two line poem the last word of each line rymes

Every day I have a carrot

so does my parrot

I said i love you dad

Then he said I am glad

I thought I was going to pop

But I just had to stop

Reading Interview

Speech Marks

WALT - use speech marks to show direct speaking.

Fill in the Speech Marks:

I watched carefully as the teacher did the example. “Now have a go at doing it yourself” she said. I still wasn't sure so I asked her to go through it again.

 “What are your hobbies” asked Jill.

“Well" said Jack "I like collecting model cars.”

“How dull” laughed Jill. Jack sulked and wouldn't speak to Jill for the rest of the day

. “What do you want to do when you grow up” said John.

“I don’t know” replied Dan “I might be a pilot.”

siapo patterns

WAlT we learnt to Design  our own siapo patterns.

Three little Pigs

Once upon a time there were Three Little Pigs that wanted to be grown ups so they said goodbye. To their mother and set off to build their own houses .

The First Little Pig built his house out of hay because he was so lazy. And he wanted to do it quickly so he started.It took me long the Little Pig said when he finshed the big bad wolf could smell bacon.

So the Wolf said “Little Pig Little Pig let me in”The Pig replied “Not by the hair of my chiny chin chin”.”Then I will Huff and Puff and blow your house down”So he did and ate the Pig and blood was flowing down his mouth mixed with bacon.

The second little pig built his house out of sticks it took him long but it payed off. When he was finished he sat down and relaxed for now. But A big bad Wolf could smell pork chops.

So the big bad Wolf knocked on the door and said “little pig little pig let me in”and little pig said “not by the hair of my chinny chin chin”.”Then I will huff and puff and blow your house down” so he huffed and puffed and blew  the house down and had pork chops for lunch.

The Third little Pig was brainy and he built his house out of bricks it took him long.When he was finished it looked like a mansion and the big bad wolf said  IT SMELLS LIKE BACON I LOVE BACON.

So the Big Bad Wolf said “let me in little pig or I will huff and puff and blow your house down.” and pig replied ”you will never blow my house down”so wolf huffed and puffed and could not blow it down so he said”I need a new plan” .

So the Wolf had an idea. He climbed on top of the little pig roof. It took him a long time but he got there and said “I’m coming to eat you up”.

But the Wolf did not know that little pig put a pot of boiling hot water at the bottom of the chimney. And the wolf fell into the pot of hot water with A crash and A splash. ANd wolf got out and ran away now the third little pig  

THE END

hight

This is what I learnt it is ever bodys hight in my group

Sentence Mash up 2

Team 4 went to Kelly Tarltons on Monday to learn about Antarctica.

I saw Penguins at Kelly Tarltons it was so cool there were Gentos.

We walked down the ramp to see the Sting Rays.

We looked at the sand Tiger Shark then we saw some other Sharks.

Food Chain

Sentence Mash up

He was reading the paper while she was working in the garden.

While she was working in the garden he was reading the paper.

They told him that they wanted to play tennis.

They wanted to play tennis they told him.

They don't know where they have left the key.

They have left the key where I don't know.

We are glad that we did not leave  our umbrella at home.

We left our umbrella at home  which made us so mad.

Maths club

Aeroplanes

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Kelly Tarlton's

On Monday team 4 went to Kelly Tarlton’s to learn about Antarctica we could not wait we hopped on the bus then it started moving. We were so excited that we were going Kelly Tarltons it took us about 20 minutes to get to Kelly Tarltons. When we got there we hopped out of the bus and waited for the others to arrive  when they came we lined up and walked inside.

At Kelly Tarlton's I saw the Penguins it was so cool there were Gentos and Kings. They were maullting I discovered when they molt they bite off their fur. So it can grow back faster but when they moult they do not swim until they grow it back.

Then we went to the StingRays we walk down the ramp and and saw it’s little head and eyes. Then it went on the rock and it look camouflaged and it looked like a part of the rock. It looked so cool but then we went.

We saw the Sharks we saw all of them first we looked at the sand Tiger Shark it looked so cool. Then we saw sharks swimming above us it looked so cool. I was walking and saw a Shark camouflaged on the rocks just like.

Then we went to this lady called Janice she was telling us about Antarctica. She called some volunteers up to the front. Janice dress them up in modern uniform to get ready for Antarctica. And then she dress someone up in a uniform what we wear today, they looked so funny then we had some morning tea.

WALT-Adding detail to the middle of sentences

WALT-Adding detail to the middle of sentences

Children at Pt england school had to stay inside,at lunchtime because it was raining,on friday

All the year 5 and 6 Children at Pt England school, have their own netbooks

My hungry tummy is ,all over the show rumbling every where,

playtime is the first meal at school every day is at 11am

akiki who graduated college works at a sushi bar

WALT

WALT-Adding Detail To The Beginning Of Sentences  

1. Luckily after lunch times, all the year 5 and their own notebooks.4. At Pt.England Mr.Burt morning tea at school and it is at 11am.

Antarctic Seals

  WALT- add detail to the middle of sentences

Antarctic Seals have a thick layer of blubber under their skin, to keep them warm in icy gales.

During winter the sun does not rise, in winter in Antarctica it doesn't get warmer it drops below freezing.

Leopard Seals prey on Antarctic Penguins when they are hungry and for dinner.

Ernest shaketon

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Add detail

WALT add detail to the middle of sentences.

All around my pear it is speckled with green and brown patches.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, so we can get stickers and Duffy awards on  Friday’s

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Lots of people like WILL.I.AM visited Auckland city to sing and also visit the MANIAKALNI trust foundation and New Zealand.

Black ops 2

In the weekends I was playing this game called black ops 2 every week I play black ops 2.It is a amazing game I got the map pack revolution but there is a new one now.Called uprising it has 4 awesome maps called magma you better watch out.One step might kill you cause there is lava every where but it is a close and far range place.

And there is the map every one keep on bragging on they said bring back firing range and this map is a re imaged place of it.Called studio  the main spot is the tower it is the middle of the map.And there are these two other maps called vertigo and encore these a good maps.

Venn diagram

Tangrams

Tangrams are shapes like squares triangles and parallelograms. They are shapes and we had to do some.Hoped you have enjoyed this here is a picture thanks for reading this.   

I had to colour my peaces of the tamgram in.Then I had to cut it out it took me a long time.Then I had to glue it on peace by peace thanks for watching.

My penguin quiz

My killer whales

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Antarctic Whales

Whales are mammals they are not fish.They are found in oceans all around the world, they are the largest animals in the world.

Whales travel in pods around the world. The male Whales are called bulls, And the females, name is cow and the baby is called calves.

Whales have enormous mouths. They Have a thick layer of fat under their skin called blubber, to keep them warm in the freezing water.

Some Whales are toothed whales. There are two types of Whales called peg toothed whales and baleen Whales that have no teeth.  

ANTARCTIC penguins

W.A.L.T

SUMMARISE THE MAIN POINT OF A TEXT,IN MY OWN WORDS.

Penguins are birds and they don’t live in the north.They live in the southern oceans around antarctica.

Penguins take waddling steps and they can’t fly.When they come ashore they stand up right.

In winter the sun doesn't rise all the way to summer.The temperature is

below freezing there are gales all thru winter.

In antarctica some penguins can survive in winter.Male Emperor penguins can stand on the freezing pack ice all thru  winter in antarctica.  

Penguins have blubber to keep them out of the cold.They have a thick layer of blubber under their skin.

Seals

WALT - We are learning to summarise the main point of a paragraph.

Seals are mammals that live in oceans all over the world.all of the Seals at antarctica are non-eared seals.these seals have lots of blubber to keep them warm.

Seals have thick, short hair on their streamlined body,to keep them warm.They have flippers to help them be superb swimmers.   

Seals are so clumsy on land but are super fast in Antarctica sea they swim in the sea all the time.When they give birth to their pups they haul out of the sea.They are graceful in sea when they swim.

Crabeater seals are the most common seals in antarctica there are thirty million of them living there.The one thing that is so weird about them is they do not eat  

crab they eat krill.

Leopard Seals hunt for penguins under water  because they are slow on ice cause they don't have legs.Penguin are not afraid on ice cause leopard seals are slow because penguins have legs that make them move fast.

Weddell Seals are so cool because in the middle of the winter every other animal swims away to a warmer part of the world.But the weddell seals stay for the whole winter and when the water is frozen

Antarctica sea temperature

I know that the Antarctic ocean gets  warmer and warmer the deeper it      
gets. 

measurements

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