adding detail to the sentence

Every day at camp bentzon Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the scary and terrifying

confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course and the small version was con course.

 I was nervous about sailing cause i was going to fall out

I was nervous as when i was about sailing camp.

I was scared when We went abseiling.

We went abseiling when i got up i went down so fast cause i thought i was going to fall.