adding detail to the sentence

Every day at camp bentzon Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the scary and terrifying

confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course and the small version was con course.

 I was nervous about sailing cause i was going to fall out

I was nervous as when i was about sailing camp.

I was scared when We went abseiling.

We went abseiling when i got up i went down so fast cause i thought i was going to fall.

Big Boys Toys

On Saturday i had to wake up early so I could be ready for my aunt so we can go big boys toys. She arrived at our house we were stool getting ready once we were finished we went. We started our long drive to Big boys toys I thought it was going to be amazing it took for ever but we got there. The line was huge finialy we got in it was so cool inside it was so cool we saw the new Lamborghini.

Then we saw some wake border and BMW and some of the best motorbike people in the world. But before all of that there was this man in a car driving on two wheels it was freaky. Sadly the day was over and we went back home it was so cool there it was a day i will never forget.